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PostSubject: A Sudden Sight..(Erosaf)   Thu Nov 10 2011, 23:37

Iellana

Brown and white patched bodice floated limply down the wide river, sinking and bobbing against the fast flowing current. Her head dipped under the water, but no struggle was made to bring it back to the surface. To the world around her, she appeared as a dead horse floating down the river. Maybe a man had killed her? It could of been true, seeing as she had red raw marks on her stomach's edge.

The limp bodice was pushed against the sandy banks, her drenched being stuck on the rocky floor's but still her eyes remainded closed.

Was she dead? Was she alive? Would anyone help her?






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PostSubject: Re: A Sudden Sight..(Erosaf)   Fri Nov 11 2011, 17:07

The chestnut stag flew along Alaknanda River, high in the sky like a bird. Oh it felt wonderful to be in the sky, like his father had often been with him. He was lonely though, Sundawn had left him for Eternal Paradise, and his father had been slain by Hades. It made the fire in his heart burn to think of the agony his homeland had been under when he had at last chased Hades away from it.

The trees were still recovering, and there was little grass left. Thunder Meadows was but a shadow of the glorious place it had been under his father's reign. A glimmer of hope had come though, the animals were returning now that its true king had returned. And this time they seemed more than eager to help him keep his lands.

His eyes darted to the river again and he snorted, seeing a glimmer that did not seem to belong. He swooped down, diving till he was racing along, only just not touching the water. Snorting, he realised that it was another horse he had noticed. A mare too. She seemed to be completely unconscious.

Snorting, he dropped down a little more, until he was able to grab her with his legs. For a moment, his wings strained, but then he lifted her out of the water, and over onto the bank of the river, putting her down gently before landing a little way from her beside the river. He dragon from the river, before turning his attention back to her.
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PostSubject: Re: A Sudden Sight..(Erosaf)   Fri Nov 11 2011, 17:24

Her sides lay still, the damp sides only moving as the cool breeze brushed over her wet pelt. Then, suddenly, a rough shudder escaped her, her head lifting before falling weakly back to the ground without a sound.

Sides now heaving, fighting for a gasping breath, her scabbed wounds crackled and stared to bleed with the harsh movements, her pale blue eyes flickering around as if trying to find a familiar sight. She froze at the sight of the winged horse before her, having never seen such a creature.

She struggled weakly to stand, but her long legs shuddered at the weight and she instantly buckled back to the ground with a cry of pain and worry.

"Who..who are you!" she whispered, looking away and refused to meet his eye "why are you on my island!"





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PostSubject: Re: A Sudden Sight..(Erosaf)   Fri Nov 11 2011, 19:33

He raised his head at her words. "Your island? My dear lady, where you are is not an island now." he smiled though. “This is the land of Freedoms Palace. Where you are now is known as the area of Thunder Meadows, a place where all are welcome who are not dark of heart.”

Saberdoria bowed his head. “You are badly hurt, my lady.” He was nothing but polite to any he met. The flames upon his neck were barely there at the moment, they were more a normal mane and tail at the moment. The true heat of them only showed when he was in battle. “I thought you might need help. I am Saberdoria, king of Thunder Meadows.”
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PostSubject: Re: A Sudden Sight..(Erosaf)   Sat Nov 12 2011, 15:09

Nervous orbs rolled to the sky as she scanned the unfamilar surrondings and her heart thumped quickly in her chest, a clear sign of her nervousness.

She struggled to his hooves once more, or at least attempted to, but as she stood she shuddered and fell once more into an ungraceful heap.

"I am Iellana," she whispered in defeat, head dropping to the ground and closed her eyes, picturing the island she ha dbeen born and raised on. In all honesty, she had never know their was another part of her world.






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PostSubject: Re: A Sudden Sight..(Erosaf)   Sat Nov 19 2011, 22:19

"You are safe here, in my lands. While you heal you may stay here, and well, when that's happened it is up to you whether you stay or not, Iellana."
He smiled at her.
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PostSubject: Re: A Sudden Sight..(Erosaf)   Sat Nov 19 2011, 22:33

The dainty head lifted from the weakened place on the ground, peering up at his great mass as it towered over her resting form.

"Many thanks," she murmured before the eyes rolled into the back of her head and she fell limp.
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PostSubject: Re: A Sudden Sight..(Erosaf)   Sat Nov 19 2011, 22:47

He sighed as he watched over her, he knew she would be safe, but his lands were burnt, and it was taking a long time for them to heal.
Things that were annoying to him at the moment. If he could, he would kill that Hades.
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PostSubject: Re: A Sudden Sight..(Erosaf)   Sat Nov 19 2011, 23:21

Some time in the early morn, while the birds started to rise and the breaking of dawn appeared, the injured and weak fae opened her innocent blue eyes and looked around with a gasp, scrambling to find purchase under her hooves on the loose gravel and leapt away from the peacefully sleeping form of the stallion.

Trying to quietly move away and make her escape, she swayed and allowed her curiousness take over. The feathered wings captured her attention, shivering slightly as she remembered the feeling of them over her bodice and noted that the other was curled tightly to his side.

Her worried expressioned lessened slightly, over come by the thanks she felt towards this stallion in this odd, oversized island.

"Stallion," she whispered, nudging his side gently with her nose "stallion, wake up."

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PostSubject: Re: A Sudden Sight..(Erosaf)   Sat Nov 19 2011, 23:39

He woke rather quickly, looking up as she nudged him. "Good morning, Iellena." He slowly got to his feet, folding his massive wings as he did. "Did you sleep well?"
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PostSubject: Re: A Sudden Sight..(Erosaf)   Sun Nov 20 2011, 00:00

She recoiled as he stood, darting away from his tall bodice but the mention of her name had her frozen all over again.

"H-How do you k-know my n-name?" she stuttered, blue eyes wide and innoncent as she struggled with the simple words and her slender yet weak bodice shook with fear.

"W...Where a-am I?" she whispered turning, looking around and shook her head with disbelief "this...this isn't my island."



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PostSubject: Re: A Sudden Sight..(Erosaf)   Sun Nov 20 2011, 00:54

He blinked a few times at her words, not sure what to make of them. "You... well.. told me last night." He sighed.
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PostSubject: Re: A Sudden Sight..(Erosaf)   Sun Nov 20 2011, 01:21

She blinked, stopping in her worried, frantic stuttering and just paused, staring broadly at him.

"No I didnt..." she whispered shaking her head in denial "I never did such thing! I've never met you before!"

She backed up a few strides, eyes wide with something between panic and confusion before she hit a tree and froze once more, panting for breath.

"Who are you?" she shot off "why am I here? Why is my side hurting!"

She suddenly paused, looking down at her wounded side and gasped with horror at the blood mattered pelt and the long scab that ran her length.

"What happened!"




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PostSubject: Re: A Sudden Sight..(Erosaf)   Sun Dec 25 2011, 13:43

"I do not know exactly how that happened, but I found you floating down the river in my lands while I was flying overhead. I got you out, we talked and you fainted afterwards," he replied. He sighed. "That talk was when you told me who you are."
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PostSubject: Re: A Sudden Sight..(Erosaf)   Mon Dec 26 2011, 01:49

This had the young fae reeling to a halt, bright eyes pausing and running over the stallions form.

"My island!" she suddenly gasped, heaving her slight mass to her feet and stared into the watery disance "Moma! Popa!" she cried, as if her voice could travel the distance and tears bubbled over in her orbs as she lowered her neighing muzzle to her chest, crying softly to herself.

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